I only need you edit the outline according to comments and do the short presentation with speaker notes

Revised Outline: In Module 2, you developed the first draft of your Informative Presentation Outline. In this module, you will revise that outline to best prepare for your Informative Presentation. This presentation will be 4-5 minutes.

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  • What feedback did you receive from your classmates and from your instructor?

Revise your outline with these suggestions.

  • What did you learn from your Module 3 readings, videos, and lessons? From your other class assignments

Revise your outline incorporating this new knowledge.

  • In Module 2, you told a 30-second story which was to align with the purpose of the Informative Presentation.
  • What feedback did you receive from your instructor?
  • Where in your Informative Presentation will this story best fit?

Revise your outline to include your 30-second story.

  • Remember that an outline is different from an essay. An outline uses bullet points and phrases versus complete sentences.
  • Your revised outline should contain the following elements clearly labeled:
      • A) Introduction with attention-getter/hook and central idea (use Chapter 10 in The Art of Public Speaking)
      • B) Body with three main points (use Chapter 8 and 9 in The Art of Public Speaking),
      • C) Conclusion (use Chapter 10 in The Art of Public Speaking).

      Also, it seems the topic is more persuasive than informative. Please find an informative topic, redo, and resubmit in video format.

    • i just need an informative outline and speaker notes for a 4 min video, I think 6 to 7 slides should be enough for the 4 minutes
    • i attached my previous outline as well as his comment. I need a revised outline thats more informative

    1st one is the 30 second story outline2nd one is the first draft of my Informative Presentation Outline3rd one is the outline with the students comments

  • the 30 second outline was good. no revision needed. I added it so you have an idea of what the 30 second video was about.
  • I just need 1 outline revision based on the teacher and students comments
  • the teacher said it was more persuasive than informative. So I just need it to be more informative